Feedback from Junction Staff

On thursday 5th of november we went to the junction again for a group veiwing and feedback from a panel of judges from the junction who both have 20+ years of experience in the industry. Sadly mine wouldn't play very smoothly due to the laptop it was on and after mine was played they got a different laptop to play the rest, but it was still good enough quality to give feed back on.After watching my video Pete Edwards and Rob Tinkler gave feed back; what they said was that it tells a good story and the actors are very beliveable, the live shots look profesional and the crowd looked far bigger than it was. How ever they did also say that whilst both the live show and the narrative sections are good individually, they don't blend together very well, which spoilt the flow of the video. they also said that the artist needs to be established ealier on